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click1
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since 2003-03-25
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0 posted 2007-01-01 03:16 AM


Push,Push
Maybe tomarrow...
I'll feel.

Seeing where,
I fell...
I know.........

Another day done,
not to be outdone,


I face reality,


And go on!!

Click

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Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
1 posted 2007-01-01 10:09 AM



Push,Push
Maybe tomarrow...
I'll feel.

I know this feeling well. I think everybody can relate to it in some way or another. I love the words you used at the end...

I face reality,

And go on!!


Very nice!
Luv Kira


click1
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since 2003-03-25
Posts 152
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2 posted 2007-01-04 02:28 AM


Thanx!! glad you got it...

Click

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