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arthur
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0 posted 2006-12-09 04:06 PM



sorrows

I walk in the valley of sorrows,
On the pathway of despair.
In fear of the coming tomorrows,
Fleeing from yesterdays care.

Death walks in these places,
For those beset with strife.
Greeting the tear stained faces,
Of those who are tired of life.

arthur

© Copyright 2006 michael bennett - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2006-12-10 09:29 PM


ohhh i really liked this it was amazing... i hope to read more soon...
hunnie

Better a witty fool than a foolish wit.
- Shakespeare

Venus1974
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2 posted 2006-12-10 09:30 PM


Gosh wow short yet so much power...I really liked this can so relate to that feeling too.

Peace and happiness to us all, Venus

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-12-10 10:04 PM


Michael?

C'mere....

Love you~Nancy

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

scorpio
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right...there
4 posted 2006-12-11 08:49 AM


A profound write Arthur.  Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2006-12-30 09:04 AM



Would love to read more of your work, Nancy.

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

wranx
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6 posted 2007-01-04 11:25 PM


I know, my friend, I know....
Perhaps a spin in an old M.G. would be a tonic

Its good to see you again.

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