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Venus1974
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0 posted 2006-12-10 09:23 PM



Thru the years Ive lived with you I've stood by your side

well atleast the days I didnt run away to hide

you bash me with your blows as if it doesnt matter

you twist me and turn me dont you know glass will shatter

you play games within my mind

you take me to another place in time

you watch as I suffer but do not lend a hand

you crumble more when I can not stand

Make me see things I dont wanna see

make me feel worthless a horrid way to be

get over it they all say not knowing I cant even though they are told...

man I am so young yet I feel so old

still you keep it there making it in my head replay

trapping me in thoughts I could never say

I too am twisted or am I not

this stuff in my head is like and evil plot

to seek out to destroy

to take over like in a convoy

take me with you or leave me behind both just will not do..

I'll search my soul as I search you

whithering moments are they unseen

no one seems to care about me the unbeing

I hide here in this shell they call my body

yet I am lost within its so shoddy

to cry or not to cry u ask and I say no

yet unwillinly the tears they seem to flow

I dont want to be this way no more

I want a way out of my minds door

Just to take a peak at what it would be

had there not been u there haunting me

but no without you I cannot function

its insane so I race around in this spaghetti junction

wandering from here to there

wondering do any really care

When night falls and its late you continue on not letting me sleep

you take control of my mind and I weep

Into the night you follow me there

watching and waiting till my breathing is bare

Holding on to every last waking sec hoping to fit more in

But I tell u its too much and then

you think of dying and going away

you think of crying never to stay

As sleep takes hold you become someone new

you become the nightmare you

you take on a form of reality only youre not

taking me down a path where fires burn hot

showing me things I refuse to see

so when I wake I am still the unbeing...me

©2003 DP

Peace and happiness to us all, Venus

© Copyright 2006 Davina Prill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-12-10 09:37 PM


wow, thais was amazing i loved the flow and the content beautiful hope to read more soon...
hunnie

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Venus1974
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2 posted 2006-12-10 09:43 PM


Thanx I appreciate that...this is one of my favorites...more because its about my brain which is ultimately me...very deep I think.

Peace and happiness to us all, Venus

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