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The insanity of dying alone
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The insanity of dying alone |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
The insanity of dying alone hunnie wounded, jaded, sick of all this pain, stepping closer to going insane, loved, hated, my very soul dying, to you, is this all satisfying? a call for help, no one replied, all alone tonight i cried. Better a witty fool than a foolish wit. |
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secret_truth_lies Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 74 |
This was really good. It was really short, but you put so much emotions in it. I hope to see more from you soon |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
that was good hunnie i like its flow |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
thanxs guys it was acually really different from my other poems, kinda a try something new thing  hunnie  Better a witty fool than a foolish wit. |
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Venus1974 Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 79Tennessee, USA |
I really liked this so much of my own thoughts and feelings here ...good job Peace and happiness to us all, Venus |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
dear hunnie_girl i enjoyed this-because it speeaks to me i can see you alone,on the floor weeping and broken arthur |
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