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Dark Poetry #4

Metronome

lifeonly
Junior Member

since 2006-10-18

Posts 18
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2006-12-08 08:30 PM

Metronome

What faith has harnessed to the jaws of man,
to shrinking scars of love and fellowship,
that flinches with the metronome of hope?

If masters, who define the terms of dreams,
could once defy their self importance they
might weigh your presence deep in golden clout.

Those days left gone in fall’s November rain
should duel like music loud within my ears,
and churn nostalgia from my hopeless form.

(What faith has harnessed to the jaws of man
that flinches with the metronome of hope?)

And if forever could condense to days,
a chance should spit at those who doubt it’s luck
and thoughts should die which gamble through my brain.

If lies could linger, tying to their source,
my frontage would be tangled with the rope,
for faith has harnessed to my thoughts and dreams
which flinches with the metronome of hope.

(da-DUM-da-DUM)

Draugluin
Junior Member

since 2006-12-08

Posts 48
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2006-12-08 09:01 PM

Interesting, nice resolve there at the end, sounds like faith will keep that metranome clicking.

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

2 posted 2006-12-08 11:24 PM

that was good and thought provoking

Venus1974
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 79
Tennessee, USA

3 posted 2006-12-10 09:32 PM

Yes I agree good and thought provoking indeed

Peace and happiness to us all, Venus

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