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secret_truth_lies
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since 2006-11-14
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0 posted 2006-12-07 06:59 PM



Tears
falling down my cheek.
Fears
that's all I seek.
Nightmares
please go away.
Memories
that's all I want to stay.
I
don't need you.
Then again
I don't know what to do.
Something
is holding me back.
You
are what I lack.
I
did not know who you were.
All
I saw was a big giant blur.
Now
I know who you are.
You
Are my faithful star.

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2006-12-08 12:56 PM


wow, secret, i really liked this poem it was a good length and had a good flow. I hope to read more soon...
hunnie

Better a witty fool than a foolish wit.
- Shakespeare

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