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secret_truth_lies Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 74 |
I thought you guys might want to see the look in my eyes. So serious, so subconscious, so depressed. From there on my soul dies. Yeah we might of gone out for 4 days. But my heart was in different situations, in so many ways. I guess I ruined our relationship, then our friendship. I guess I got a 2 in 1. How Fun!... I just wish one day I can be true. Just try not to mess up on what I do. For some reason I thought we might belong. My hearts said stay, but my mind said so-long Every love story has a beginning. for some reason our love story had to end. That's something we'll never understand. I'm sorry I lost you You're everything a girl could wish for. some reason, my wish came true. Dedicated to Steven [This message has been edited by secret_truth_lies (11-18-2006 04:02 PM).] |
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secret_truth_lies Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 74 |
tell me what you guys think about it. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
i really liked this secret i hope to read more in the future.. very nice flow  hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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secret_truth_lies Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 74 |
Thanks I really like this poem as well |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
Oh I remember when you two were dating. ahhh... I'm sorry chica. I hope you two are friends by now. It's been awhile. Well... i hope for tha best. Love ya |
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chickkybabe New Member
since 2007-04-17
Posts 4qld Australia |
its a great poem and has a really nice flow.. but from a jaded womans point of view no man is worth the pain you are going through.. in the end we are always the ones that get hurt.. but again a really nice poem with a great flow |
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