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mged Junior Member
since 2007-03-29
Posts 39ND |
this is my frist so i dont no if it will be any good a pit of darkness fallen deep the sun shines in nothing when the darkness closes around me i feel a sadness only i can see the very fiber of life fallen apart the love of my life gone nothing left to share nothing but darkness everywhere |
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mged Junior Member
since 2007-03-29
Posts 39ND |
this is my frist so i dont know if it is any good but this is something that is dear to me |
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mged Junior Member
since 2007-03-29
Posts 39ND |
hey marcus wut up nice poem. Oh shape so cute, luv of life huh well hope ya have fun. tt ya lata . tootles. peace |
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mged Junior Member
since 2007-03-29
Posts 39ND |
this is from someone else,one of mged's friends. so wuts up marcus. so how many other poems are ya gonna right well ttu later and have a GREEEAAATTT DAAAYYY!!!!! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
when the darkness closes around me i feel a sadness~ I can relate to this... Very good although short. Welcome to Passions  hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Welcome to PIP!!! Very nice poem! Be good and have fun!! Lots of Luv Kira ~Should the truth be so buried |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
Welcome, Welcome, Welcome... Lovely indeed! †The Divine Sinner† "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster |
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