Dark Poetry #4 |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
fist of fits hand of handles womb of woman born of candles my mind finds a lesser speak and your saviors turn their cheek questions test you methods best you force the quest and reinvest you if the windows can’t be closed pluck a petal from a rose place one each upon your eyes all is rosy say the flies "Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead, and our body is the tomb." Socrates [This message has been edited by coyote (11-21-2003 08:10 PM).] |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
Yes, indeed.... Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks for the reply, ali. It is appreciated. coyote 8) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Coyote, this stanza is amazing: questions test you methods best you force the quest and reinvest you YES please keep doing just that xxoo |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks, littlewing. He scribbles from memories in a drafty room. coyote 8) |
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KuruShio Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110 |
I had to post on this one i adore this stanza. "my mind finds a lesser speak and your saviors turn their cheek" mmm makes me feel all warm and tingly. May the muse never leave you, and if she does make sure the door hits her in the butt. Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless. |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
This is a fun, quirky write. Visually strong with a rap feel to it. Enjoyed. Sparticus Even with insects- |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhh you made me smile with this Billy, indeed a great write. Enjoyed m'friend. Maree fate is not just |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
KuruShio, Thank you so much for the read and kind comments. Btw, the muse is always naked. Sparticus, Your rap take is very kewl, thanks man. Ancient spells and riddles often rapped. Maree, Sweetest Maree, truly thou knowest, I walk among the dead, lol. Thanks, m'friend. Coyote 8) "Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead, |
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