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redrobin21865 Junior Member
since 2003-11-09
Posts 12Florida, USA |
You thought you had won the battle Because of the rising sun But my friend, how wrong you are The war has just begun The spirits that protect me Are angered to no end They are around you always It's their breath you feel with the wind You thought you had caused strife Yes, for a while you did Was it worth it?Was it worth your life? It is now time to pay Oh, how costly that will be Was it worth the payment? You shall never again be free I hear a ringing, Yes, the bells doth toll Oh, my friend, they ring for you They are now after your soul They will find you, you can not hide They know where you are always They know where you abide Closer they come with each ringing bell How soon with this be? My friend, only time will tell This I know for sure There will come a day When they finally get you You will have to pay |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
I know about this punishment. i have a few friends that almost did the same thing. nice write here, i can identify. - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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redrobin21865 Junior Member
since 2003-11-09
Posts 12Florida, USA |
Thanks River. Glad you liked it redrobin |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
....redrobin...hmmm..was Sparticus writing about you then? /pip/Forum84/HTML/000267.html Just a thought... and the other thought is that I like this on two levels. First, as a poem it absolutely rocks -- excellent exposition throughout. Second, I wish I had even one protective spirit. I've had to protect myself from spirits all too often (as in my Shattering Spirit, which is down there somewhere in this forum), but I've never had the slightest help. Guidance, yes, but protection? Zippo! |
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KuruShio Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110 |
RedRobin This is not only excelent it seems to be a page out of my mind. Justice, Retribution, Vengence and they will cower in the end. |
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redrobin21865 Junior Member
since 2003-11-09
Posts 12Florida, USA |
Thank you both for reading and commenting. A lot of my poetry tends to be on the dark side. Glad you liked it. redrobin |
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