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Trickster112 Junior Member
since 2006-11-04
Posts 18Chicago, Illinois, U.S |
Like a pain in my heart, a knife to my abdomin, a gun to my head, I'm too mad at 'em. Don't know what to do, I don't know what to say, it's all jus gone away, everything is blurry, Love with me, won't ever stay... |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Welcome to Passions Trickster112!!! Like a pain in my heart, a knife to my abdomin, a gun to my head, I'm too mad at 'em. Very nice write! I luved this part the most. (I know the feeling) I hope to see more of you're poetry. (From what i see here i bet it'll be very good!) Hugs and Hershey bars for the new member! ~Luv Kira |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
I want hersey bars!!!! They don't have them in italy. Can I have some? |
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Aeris Nicole Junior Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 21 |
i like it much.  |
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PurpleRain New Member
since 2006-11-06
Posts 3 |
Good work, keep writing! |
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youngfirefly Junior Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 12 |
Good poem! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow i really liked this, Welcome to Passions... hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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