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journie
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0 posted 2006-11-28 02:31 PM



The shadows that empower my soul so rich and deep beyond control,

The pain that lay within begging to come out and be born again,

The tortuous struggle that I feel to be alive to feel real,

The dark shadows consume my being holding me back from a life I once had,

The hole is getting bigger and spinning faster dragging me down with all it’s power,

The emptiness that is within my heart will never be filled with love as along as we are apart.

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1 posted 2006-11-29 12:30 PM


hmmm very descriptive i liked this ...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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