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Dark Poetry #4

Terror By Night

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2003-09-27 11:12 AM

How I'd love to wander
In solitude by night.
to look at stars,
to bathe in the moon's
mysterious light.

But desperate, pathetic
men wield a power
through the dark hours
causing untold damage and fear,

denying our innate
privileges.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-09-27 01:36 PM

Maggie,

I absolutely adore this write
ther eis no tone thing out of place
it is perfection
and for some reason . . .
I know this . . . as if I wrote it
strange, I know
xxoo

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-09-27 05:13 PM

So true, because of the evil that lurks within we are deprived of our freedom to do those things.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

3 posted 2003-09-29 11:41 PM

i agree with littlewing...great write, but it seems so familiar...maybe we all saw a movie and the words hit a subconsius thing somewhere...wierd...but grooovy =) i mean...eerie too. lol.

"The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

4 posted 2003-09-30 05:48 AM

Thank you River,can't remember a film like that but it is familiar as we all have to think twice about going out alone, day or night. Maggie

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