Dark Poetry #4 |
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"sin belove" |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
there drifts a sigh across the silent glen where sunset holds the sky and shadows never end where once we lay our bodies full entwined lips finding every way in troth to kisses bind on the heather green far from this castle keep in ecstasy unseen 'neath silent willow's weep to voices of the dove in summer blossom's dew we made a bonny love as e'r there was so true upon this sin belove she offered up her life to providence above for being another's wife I will weep for ages in my dungeon cell awaiting out the wages of sin in living hell "Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead, |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Wow...it's as if I was sitting in the company of this person, and he was telling me about his plight. WOW...captivated me! Good one. ![]() Shara~ ![]() Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks, Shara. I've been trying to write something more ancient in style. I appreciate the read. coyote ![]() "Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey coyote, this is a great piece medieval and romantic and bittersweet reminded me of King Arthur . .. beautiful writing keep it up please xxoo |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks so much, littlewing. I am your humble servant. Your comments are always most appreciated. coyote 8) "Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is sad and lovely and lyrical, and indeed quite classical in tone. This was refreshing to read, and although dark in tone, it made me smile as it reminded me of our old friend Michael Anderson, who has been sorely missed. More of these, please? I'll be looking forward to reading you. ![]() |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Oh, my bonnie wee one, many times I have stolled the glens but I never saw you. This is so beautiful. Maggie |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks for the kind comments, Serenity Blaze and cusick. 'Tis still a "work in progress". I'll try to post the final version of this one for ya sometime. coyote ![]() |
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