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Enmity |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
This is just a poem I wrote awhile ago. I wanted to get someone's opinion on it. Don't take it offensive. Enmity I’ll tell you this… You should stand in your little corner of hatred where you’re fitted, If you are to walk in the world I live in and not be stepped on like the trash you are Don’t be so bizarre Or go somewhere far. Stop switching up your style to fit in; end the illusions! Your attitude is scheduled for an execution. You’re only an intrusion. You and trash have so far of a fusion, The resemblance causes confusion; You make so many accusations. I’m starting to lose my patience You’re responsible for your actions. You’re a fraction of satisfaction. You’re so far lower than dirt that I wonder why you don’t get hurt sitting in the middle of the Earth. You’re so simplistic and unrealistic that I could write everything that you do in statistics. I’ve developed so strong of an enmity; that I think I need a remedy. Get out of my face I can smell your disgrace. Race is not the case nor is it his friends or his place; It’s his need to be rude; his ability to create a feud… You know what… Leave here now you’re killing the mood. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
i will say the same as i replied to this poem before i liked it it had a strong subject very nicely written... hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
Thanks again! |
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