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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2006-10-23 02:10 AM



Where is my eye,
The sky I see,
So bright,
Owls fill the omni ascent night.

Shares of my heart,
See the wings,
Land the tides,
Seeing something with its shine.

Cantor to this hour,
Maidens fill the open light,
Dressing to the midnight sight.

Blue is night,
Heart is life,
Romance is the biggest lie.

Smiles perched along her side,
Souls creep,
The dark speaks,
She is fine.

Midnight is the nightly sky,
Her blue water drowns my sides,
I love this life.


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writergrl
Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 73
Las Vegas, Nevada
1 posted 2006-10-30 10:45 PM


this was a wonderful piece, so well orchestrated and filled with rich imagery...your choice of title fits well.

writergrl

"You cannot stain a black coat."
Nicholas Nickleby

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