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Poem: Pained Forever

auctus
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since 2006-07-25

Posts 6
Australia

0 posted 2006-10-29 07:05 AM

Here is a poem i wrote on a particular subjec twhich should(hopefully) come through in the reading.

So numb without you, so lost and confused,
It’s easier to run, the face life without you.
Feeling heartless and needy, the shock overcomes,
The pain inside just, continues to drum.

Continue to hope, pray for a new day,
Without you beside me, forward I can’t say.
Weeping and Woeing, are you watching me now?
Smiling down from your house in the clouds?

I would give it all to see you again,
A strong hand to grasp, a strong heart to care.
Onwards can I go, how much can I bare,
Why is this pain, why is life so unfair.

Faith, I've been told, by all to have,
But how can I when it’s torn from my hands?
Joking and laughing, these things I can’t do.
They left me when you did, pained to be true.

Lost and listless, blind to the light,
I can only hope you stay in my heart this night.

Goodbye my other, my pillar, my strength,
I love you forever, till my very last breath.
Thankyou all very much for reading

"Truth Can Be The Only Deception"
Carpe diem

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-10-29 07:20 AM

awww this was very sad. But I liked it. Actually I really love it. You did an awesome job on this. I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing with us.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2006-11-03 12:58 PM

very strong flow i liked this...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

3 posted 2006-11-25 02:58 PM

I liked this too, i noticed a couple spots that sound like they came from some linkin park songs, but other than that i liked it. The rhyme sceme was awesome.

"My soul is adrift in oceans of madness
Repairing the rift that you have created"~ Disturbed

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

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