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poison
New Member

since 2006-10-13

Posts 2
malaysia

0 posted 2006-10-13 02:34 AM

In a fever of a minute
Lifeless,unveiled
thinly disguised memoirs
Spring to life
Hunting familiar grounds
Weaving a poetic spell
of sealed,startling,sensational revelations..
The poignancy of perverted despair
of bad karma,separation and reconciliation
and of silent,mustered hopes feeding the Earth
to face the stirred midnight's inertia
by embracing the mystical genesis of life
as our fates intertwined...
in desperation of strange fits of passion

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

1 posted 2006-10-13 08:14 AM

Welcome to PIP! Really enjoyed your poem, you really show that you have a good command of the English language, your vocabulary is very advanced. I wish I could write so well.

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-10-13 09:13 AM

Hi poison

Welcome to the darker side of passions! It's nice to see a new face joining.What a great first post to start your time off with pip

"I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->---

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2006-10-13 12:04 PM

poison!
Welcome to Passions. And though I'm no critic, I think you're good and this is an excellent opening to your time here in these blue walls. Very well done with much imagery and things to ponder. Hope you love it here half as much as I have.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

JenniferMaxwell

Member Elite

since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

4 posted 2006-10-13 06:44 PM

Welcome to PIP.

Love the opening line in your poem. Hope to see you post more.

trUstNooNe
Member

since 2006-05-21

Posts 91

5 posted 2006-10-14 11:43 PM

wow i really nice job..i like alot..

Khatharsis
Junior Member

since 2006-05-21

Posts 42

6 posted 2006-10-15 12:37 PM

great peice. And as like others have already said. great opening peice to start off your days here.

SATURN
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 78
ok,us

7 posted 2006-10-15 06:20 PM

Welcome to pip very nice write loved it.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

8 posted 2006-10-15 10:50 PM

Welcome to passions this was a very well written first post. Also the vocabulary was impeccable.
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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