Four lines of poem (What I felt yesterday)

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Dark Poetry #4

Four lines of poem (What I felt yesterday)

ozlem
Junior Member

since 2006-10-06

Posts 16

0 posted 2006-10-07 02:40 PM

Life sharpens me
I can bleed you
Get away from me
If you don't want to get hurt

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-10-07 04:58 PM

a good warning...simply stated

M

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

2 posted 2006-10-07 10:14 PM

You posted it here! (Very happy to see you're poem up!)

Please keep writing so I can keep reading!

Hugs and Hershey bars!

~Kira

ozlem
Junior Member

since 2006-10-06

Posts 16

3 posted 2006-10-08 04:35 PM

Thanks

It was just a try. I wrote it friday night because of an uneasy feeling i was caught up.

I wasn't sure if i may post it here.

Another quartet is on the way.

shatteredsilver
Member

since 2005-03-31

Posts 63
middle of nowhere

4 posted 2006-10-21 10:11 PM

Thank you. In four little lines you captured the exact feeling I have some days. Well done indeed.

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