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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

0 posted 2003-11-20 01:40 PM

crystalballholderweavingspellsatdarkofnight
hetakesmeuntohimselfloomingbeforemeinhunger
Iliemybodyupontheslategreycoldandwatchthedagger
drivedeep

[This message has been edited by littlewing (11-20-2003 05:32 PM).]

tecoyah
Member

since 2003-11-16

Posts 83
NY

1 posted 2003-11-20 05:02 PM

hard to read as expected...but damn, gonna go kiss my wife...tx

KuruShio
Member

since 2003-11-18

Posts 110

2 posted 2003-11-20 05:36 PM

excelent visuals, and interesting method of wordconecting. I had not seen that before

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2003-11-20 10:31 PM

instresting form here Sue, i like it it works for the subject matter, and it makes you pay more attention to the words being said...

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

4 posted 2003-11-20 10:42 PM

I totally agree ^. The way you wrote it not only makes it more interesting, you're forced to think and really concentrate on what you're reading, the piece is beautiful.

Essorant
Member Elite

since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

5 posted 2003-11-21 06:28 AM

Darklittlewing,

It is good to break convention sometimes; I like the way you have done that with your style here and subject. Very keenly done.

Graces,

Essorant.

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

6 posted 2003-11-21 11:49 AM

This will definitely make one read slow. Liking your style more and more lw.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

7 posted 2003-11-21 05:24 PM

aisthecentreofblack
asifeelthelackoflight
wheneverythingissodark
oisthecentreofyouallthatis
brightandroundandbeautiful
yesyouarelikeyouareyesyouare
gasinthecentreofmagic
andifeellackofspaces
butthislifehassomanyblanks
nowwouldyoulikesomecroissants
?

regards
sudhir

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

8 posted 2003-11-21 07:22 PM

welllittlewingyousurediditthistime=)
nicestylemademethinktoohahahahaluvya-River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

9 posted 2003-11-21 07:26 PM

Excellent, littlewing.
Very dark and wholly deep,
there are many altars,
for a myriad of sacrifice.

Thanks,
coyote

"Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead,

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

10 posted 2003-11-22 01:12 PM

Ilovehowyouhavesharedthewaywecommunicate
Thewaywecompressourthoughtsandfeelings
intoacompactpackage
Youcouldsaythatthisisourveryownzipfile

Isleofviewgypsy

Bythewaythepoemislovely

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2003-11-22 11:34 PM

tecoyah . .
cool hope you had a good time
*smile*
thank you

Kuru - thank you was the first time I have
ever written like that

Thank you Matt I didnt even see it like
that *smile*

Hey Hatter thank you so much that was
so kind of you

Hey Kevin, Darklittlewing lol
thank you so much

ahahaha poe, yes it sure will
will squint your eyes reading it too
OUCH . . thank you

Sudhir? you gave me a huge smile and
yes I would please . . .
(you should post that on its own, I love it
of course without the croissants)
I ate them lol
thank you sooo much that is beautiful
up there

HeyRiverIamsogladthatyoulikedthis
andithinkweshouldallwritelikethis
fromnowonsonovodyreallytakesthetime
toseewhatwearewritinglolthankyou

Coyote? thank you for that response

HeybabyIamgladyoulikethisseeingasiwroteit
whilespeakingtoyuandyesazipfilefullofmany
lifetimesindeedheymaybeifwewritelikethis
allthetimethenwewontneedaspacebareverwouldnt
thatbetoocoolimeanthinkhowfastyouwouldbe
abletotype

isleofviewmoreeachday
thankyou

Thanksguys
xxoo

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wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

12 posted 2003-11-22 11:47 PM

Hey Baby!
Isthatacrackonmyhuntingpeckingmistakeladentyping?

"In looking Northward, I see a light"

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

13 posted 2003-11-23 12:19 PM

this

is
cool

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

14 posted 2003-11-23 01:09 AM

*smile* ahahah NO, it is a crack about you having to get a new keyboard . . .
*evilittlewinggrin*

Hey Bri?

THIS I believe flew from Marilyn and
your hand, landing into my pen
*smile*

thank you
xxoo

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

15 posted 2003-11-23 09:14 AM

I wouldn't have thought tosayitthatway, but dang if it doesn't work!

~~J

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

16 posted 2003-11-24 07:11 AM

Thank you James I didnt think
either just wrote *smile*
xxoo

Essorant
Member Elite

since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

17 posted 2003-11-28 01:45 AM

Hey how did you know my name?

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Loverlost
Member

since 2003-11-25

Posts 89
UK

18 posted 2003-12-02 10:29 AM

This works wonderfully. Very "Dylan Thomas"!
You never cease to amaze me.

Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels

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