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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-11-26 05:43 PM

She recognized the signs too late.

Downcast eyes. Averted glances.
Boredom. Sleeping too much.
Bad eating habits.
Slovenliness.
Refusing comraderie.

She recognized the signs too late
to reach out and grab the hands
of Fate.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2003-11-26 07:14 PM

That could be a loved one of mine. Kacy dear girl you are the best. Thanks.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-11-27 09:42 PM

I learned all this good stuff from you.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-11-29 08:16 AM

nice

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

4 posted 2003-11-29 10:21 AM

Strong verse with a powerful message.
Well done.

coyote 8)

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

5 posted 2003-11-29 09:58 PM

Midnite, I see the last line "to reach out and grab the hands
of Fate."

as being the cornerstone, as she knew all along. Real nice write. Enjoyed.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-11-30 04:07 PM

ahh Kacy . . I know of this now
somone extremely dear to me . . .
hoping they grab my hand
thank you
xxoo

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2003-11-30 08:29 PM

Thank you for reading and replying, Brad

Coyote, thank you for reading and commenting

Poe, yes, she knew all along

Sue, hoping with you

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

8 posted 2003-11-30 10:41 PM

Nicely done!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2003-12-01 12:36 PM

Hello Eddie, long time no seeum!
What's happening in Aussieland? LOL, have you been flying in other blue skies?
thanks for reading and commenting

bbent
Senior Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 521
Alaska

10 posted 2003-12-01 05:07 AM

Gosh....Could be me on any given day.I'm sure I've missed many the opportunity because of fear.I'm sure I've played both roles too.Well ,cool write,hope all's well in your world and that fate offers many a comforting hand in your future.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2003-12-01 06:19 AM

Hey Ray,

all is well here. It's more general than specific, yet also a bit about some I've known along the trail.
You're right, many of us have had our share of those days.

Loverlost
Member

since 2003-11-25

Posts 89
UK

12 posted 2003-12-02 10:21 AM

So sad..so sad. I love it!

Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

13 posted 2003-12-02 12:02 PM

LOL, oh, so you likem sad? I'll have to send you a really really sad one, one of these days. Nice to meet you! Welcome to Passions.

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