My Grandma What Big Eyes You Have

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Dark Poetry #4

My Grandma What Big Eyes You Have

Moonkist
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since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2006-09-30 01:20 PM

the sight of poetry makes me high

the scent of it near water's side... crimson tide... darkness rides.... till sunrise

touching it
with my mind's eye

hearing it... listen ....

to the voices found in the silence
where pure potentialities lie...

cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-10-08 09:07 PM

Not to be mean or anything, but were you high when you wrote this? j/k ☺
very good

Moonkist
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since 2006-09-29

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2 posted 2006-10-08 09:16 PM

Hi cherries! No, I wasn't high... but I guess it sounds like it, huh? I thank you for your reply!

~Moonkist~

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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

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3 posted 2006-10-12 11:40 AM

it was cool looking at poetry with different eyes good write

hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

Khatharsis
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since 2006-05-21

Posts 42

4 posted 2006-10-15 12:21 PM

This was beautiful. The imagery was outstanding and ya didnt have to use all that much to describe it perfectly.

great peice

Moonkist
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since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
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5 posted 2006-10-22 06:04 AM

Thanks hunnie_girl and Khatharsis! I love the senses...

~Moonkist

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