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zigwield
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since 2006-06-25
Posts 61


0 posted 2006-09-20 07:44 PM


Its a strange moment
i have so much meaning
to tell you my sweety
at last i know what i need
and above all
remember beloved one
so beautiful as you are
woman of no match
i heard the news about you
you left and now
every night and day i cry
cause i cannot another moment
without your unique
awesome kind of love

once, only once i ve seen your eyes
you were in my dreams and one night
i would never forget woman of my dreams
i should start to get used to not being with you
and find myself something Even Better
cause after all
we are all so same to the world's eyes
that at nights that few sleep
we laugh without a true reason
since we lost paradise

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burntsiena
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since 2006-08-10
Posts 34
Rhode Island
1 posted 2006-09-20 10:33 PM


I love the last three lines!!

Burnt Siena
"the never ending vacation - how I wish I was one"

lanaia74
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since 2006-08-25
Posts 67

2 posted 2006-09-24 07:30 AM


Superb! Bravo! Applauds!
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