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Spike Daft
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since 2006-09-12
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0 posted 2006-09-12 11:31 PM


A Snowy Night

Even though my head was spinning
At a sideways glance I saw him grinning
And as I fell into the snow
Blood steamed and cooled where it chose to flow
Before I drew my final breath
I looked into the face of death
And yes, that grin, that grin was there
I felt it in the heavy air
That grin was the last thing I saw or felt
Before the world and snow began to melt
And when the darkness finally set in
I lay with a grin in my pool of sin.

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lanaia74
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since 2006-08-25
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1 posted 2006-09-13 05:55 AM


VERY well done!
nostalgic*pride
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since 2006-08-23
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NowhereVille
2 posted 2006-09-13 11:16 AM


OMG, OMG!! This was absolutely fantastic. I completely agree with the person above me!! AWESOME!
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