Dark Poetry #4 |
Crime |
Philmont Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 61 |
I know it's a crime for me to be writing here because I promised you I'd set aside poetry for a while and concentrate instead on the more serious matters in life -- my car, my house, my hygene I thought you should know I've been watching your son quite a lot lately and I've come to the conclusion that he's really sad he doesn't feel loved by anyone and he thinks that he can't accept a compliment for fear that it will make him look weak as though he needs encouragement and he can't cry because it's not manly and he can't love himself because that's too damned narcissistic and he can't bring himself to love others because their ulteriour motives might be to take advantage of him. I told him the truth that there's no god and he took it so badly, probably because he'd been using god as a crutch all his life and so I took that away from him and now he is in existential freefall. I know it's a crime to hate yourself but really your son needs to do a bit of it; it will do him some good. |
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lanaia74 Member
since 2006-08-25
Posts 67 |
Absolutely AWESOME! |
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nostalgic*pride Member
since 2006-08-23
Posts 122NowhereVille |
Hmm... I liked it. Very interesing way to put things. But if you don't mind me asking, who are you talking to? |
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