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SATURN
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since 2004-05-04
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ok,us

0 posted 2006-08-19 01:15 AM


The Stars in heaven know not what I feel
they hang with endless beauty knowing
everyone will love them

They dont have the cliks, the groups, the lies, and deceit that we deal with every day of our lives

They hang with endless beauty knowing everyone
will love them. they know not what I feel,no,what we feel

~SATURN~

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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

1 posted 2006-08-20 05:03 PM


I really LIKE This one short but got to the point. I hope to see more in the future.

         ~Courtney~

shatteredsilver
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since 2005-03-31
Posts 63
middle of nowhere
2 posted 2006-08-29 12:56 PM


"They hang with endless beauty."
Fantastic

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