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zigwield
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since 2006-06-25
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0 posted 2006-08-13 01:37 PM



It is the same feeling
every day that consumes my soul
feeling that death is near
so perhaps it is the need
to end every single demon
no longer this awfull fear
people play with me?

all the forces against me
the person that i am
if you like it accept it
or else just end with it,
it is enough like a gossip story
what does it trying to tell me
i no longer care

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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

1 posted 2006-08-21 07:03 PM


Yeah I think this was a nice write, but at the second to the end needs fixing, but other then that it was a great poem. Nice job, I hope to see more from you in the future.
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