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Worst enemy
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Decriel Junior Member
since 2006-08-08
Posts 27 |
I saw you in the mirror Looking back at me I wondered who you really were What was it you could see? I smile knowing you would do the same i look away hoping to escape your deathly stare but my attempt to escape you was made in vain i spun around & where ever i looked you were there i sit down breathing deeply thinking what to do i look up and i see you sitting down mocking me i stand up slowly thinking, thinking it all through all i want is for you to leave and me to be free i walk away you follow me always there next to me i look ahead and see grass and not another mirror i run towards it and smile as i escape my worst enemy i look back at the nothingness and in my dream i shiver |
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Sorrow Member
since 2006-06-14
Posts 83Ireland |
I like the feeling of the inescapable in your poem. In life you can push away a lot of hurtful or cruel people but you can never get away from yourself. |
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Decriel Junior Member
since 2006-08-08
Posts 27 |
Thank you sorrow, if we could live in a world where we are at peace with ourselves there is no thinking of what this world would be like... |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
My brother, the emotions you stir in my heart... You know how i feel and what im about... I commend you my brother in capturing the essence of it. I applaud you! A sign in the wind |
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