Dark Poetry #4 |
You watched me... |
Decriel Junior Member
since 2006-08-08
Posts 27 |
You watched me bleed, you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye you watched me fall, looked down on my from above you watched me fade, this feeling for you was of love you watched me wilt, my death was in vain you watched me cry, these cuts of deep and flaring pain you watched me cringe, my life now completely gone you watched me... |
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Sorrow Member
since 2006-06-14
Posts 83Ireland |
very dark, very sad. I got a sense of hopelessness and abandonment from your poem which i can relate to. I feel this way most of the time. |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
Very sad my brother, i know how you feel here. ive am there all the time. I commend you A sign in the wind |
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