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The Saint of Animosity
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The Saint of Animosity |
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lace_of_light Junior Member
since 2006-08-02
Posts 44 |
This was inspired by someone I know And hate When home can't be found Nothingness consumes me Better to be six feet in the ground No one to answer my desperate plea I am alone in these chains Blood words scribbled on the wall My hatred and suffering reigns No one to answer my disintegrating call He holds me down against his chest Fire burns in our eyes He tells me he once was blessed No one knows of my futile cries I feel the tears in my skin If only you had forgiven my crime Seeping slowing in is sin But you turned away this time My lips crack and my throat burns The shackles tighten Only a drop of water, my body yearns My demons don't frighten Darkness settles around me, now Cold resides in my soul Before the throne of Nothing I bow Ennui, I am black as coal When the fire stops, the cold remains Silver slivers of light trickle away The ashes of hate my mind contains Only the night is left to stay As your sins alone corrode my sight This is the fall, the end of things If only I could speak, I'd make this right Death and decay my lifelessness sings I dance alone in shadows Left by all to this horrid beauty I am alone, no one follows I hear it, watch it, eat away at me You scorched my life I am nothing but ice You surrounded me with strife I am paying your price Fire in one hand Frozen fear on the other Left in a desolate land Remaining there under a snowy cover I am nothing but cold But fiery hatred consumes me Because of you, I'm told You're the Saint of Animosity "areyouinorareyouout? eitherwayyoucan'twin." he said. "butthefallwillbefantasticandwhat'sleftisnothinglessthanperfection" |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
Another amazing piece of work. The images were absolutely bone chilling and beautifull. I loved the feel of this poem, so dark and evil, yet sad and lonely. Pleading for forgiveness. I have felt exactly this way before. I loved how emotive it was. it spoke to me so deeply. Keep up the awesome work! A sign in the wind |
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Decriel Junior Member
since 2006-08-08
Posts 27 |
AMAZING!!!! the picture you paint is... beyond words, as i read it chills flooded my body... Trully magnificent |
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