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Decriel
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since 2006-08-08
Posts 27


0 posted 2006-08-09 01:53 PM



you stand over my shallow unmarked grave,
wondering if this is how a coward behaves,
unable to stand the hardships of my life,
running away causing nothing but strife,
this selfish act of escape cannot ammend,
all those people in life i did offend,
this was it, this was the only way,
i could not bare to live another day,
now that i am buried for now i am dead,
please dont grieve with a bowed head,
wipe away tears and lift your head high,
as you say a final and ill earned good bye


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Digital_Hell
Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202
Amidst black roses
1 posted 2006-08-09 02:41 PM


How our work echoes another my brother... I loved the dark emotion in this poem. Keep up this awesome work

"wipe away tears and lift your head high,
as you say a final and ill earned good bye" i especially loved this part.  

Very chilling and lovely!

A sign in  the wind
The fatal last breath
Soft prelude to death
Alone
Amidst black roses

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