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trUstNooNe
Member

since 2006-05-21

Posts 91

0 posted 2006-07-23 11:07 PM

How I feel is Different.
Deep inside I want to be over.
But I know I have my life yet to live.
To begin and things still yet to learn.
Trouble to cause and hearts to break,
But make no mistake I'm in no fast haste.
One moment I'll be having the time of my life,
Then the next I want to go and find a corner
and cry and a bottle of v*dk* to drown
my sorrows in.
Knowing that's not the right answer,I try
and change, but there's no hiding who I am.
On the outside I look fine, but deep inside...
I feel different.

Venus1974
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 79
Tennessee, USA

1 posted 2006-07-23 11:47 PM

so sad yet theres hope in admittance

Peace and happiness to us all, Venus

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

2 posted 2006-07-24 05:39 AM

First of all I would like you to commend on your honesty, and know that you are in control of your own future wether it be good or bad.
Good Write!

V

the quell
Member

since 2006-07-19

Posts 144
Liverpool, UK

3 posted 2006-07-24 08:18 AM

ohh we've all been there. Especially with the "v*dk*"!!!! Another great piece

Where black, bleeding roses await the Thirteen,
I see not the stars, but the darkness between

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

4 posted 2006-07-25 07:09 PM

"One moment I'll be having the time of my life,
Then the next I want to go and find a corner
and cry and a bottle of v*dk* to drown
my sorrows in.
Knowing that's not the right answer,I try
and change, but there's no hiding who I am."

I enjoyed this part of the poem a bunch! It's like I am at times, it is so relatable for me when I read this... The part about there's no hiding who I am really got to me, that's my all time favorite part. Because, it's true, it's hard to hide yourself cause it will always show through...

Thanks for sharing and your honesty in this piece, I can't wait to read more

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Philmont
Member

since 2004-01-10

Posts 61

5 posted 2006-07-25 09:34 PM

Yeah we all wear masks like that. And we all have emotional rollercoasters, especially us guys. Good write,

Sorrow
Member

since 2006-06-14

Posts 83
Ireland

6 posted 2006-07-25 10:11 PM

I can relate to this poem. I know the pain of being different. Unfortunately there's very few things that can numb that pain...

perfect stranger
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 54
on cloud 9

7 posted 2006-08-07 02:40 PM

this is poem is so sad,at some point of time most people have been there i have not a nice experience but things do get better,go easy on the vodka,take care of yourself.

Digital_Hell
Member

since 2006-06-05

Posts 202
Amidst black roses

8 posted 2006-08-09 05:27 PM

Very sad, i think weve all been there at some time. Being rather different myself i can relate very well. A good write. Keep it up

A sign in the wind
The fatal last breath
Soft prelude to death
Alone
Amidst black roses

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