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My tragedy |
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Decriel Junior Member
since 2006-08-08
Posts 27 |
Alone I sit on the top of a hill Thinking of how my unlife has been Of the pain and the sorrow I've seen In the eyes of my victims before they lay still. Though a hunter in darkness I must be The feelings of guilt always come back When I sink my teeth in another girl's neck My conscience is the only light left in me. All I want is to leave the shadows behind And truly this time I will For I no longer desire to kill Thoughts of light are now on my mind. I'm waiting for the sunrise today On the lonely hill where I sit And maybe, I'll catch a glimpse of it Before the wind blows my ashes away. |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
Trully dark my brother. But very nice, some chilling imagery. and remember, Ill be with you on that hill A sign in the wind The fatal last breath Soft prelude to death Alone Amidst black roses |
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Sorrow Member
since 2006-06-14
Posts 83Ireland |
I like the lonely and desolate feel to your poem. This is also the first poem i've read that referenced Buffy the vampire slayer! I don't know if your a fan of the show or if you ment to reference it but thats just something i noticed! |
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Decriel Junior Member
since 2006-08-08
Posts 27 |
i apologise sorrow but never have i once watched that filth. In fact me watching tv is a raity full stop |
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