Dark Poetry #4 |
Soothing Song |
SATURN Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 78ok,us |
The Soothing Song you play That Soothing Song you sing makes my heart beat with passion. The Soothing Song you play That Soothing Song you sing makes my mind wonder far. The Soothing Tone of your voice That Soothing Melody of your song makes my soul dance and twirl. The Soothing Pleasure of your company That Soothing Touch of your hand comforts me when I need it the most. The Soothing Song you play That Soothing Song you sing makes my entire being love you more. MI AMOR My Soothing Angel so why did you leave. |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
i thought this was a very neat approach to the topic i loved the concept of 'the soothing song' and the way you ended it, good work Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free |
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SATURN Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 78ok,us |
Thanks this was about a friend that left and he didnt know how i felt before he left state. |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
that's always tough... i have 3 tattooes dedicated to ones that got away like that... now i feel that it's better to know than never b/c those three still leave me wondering what could've have been to this day... finality is a wonderful thing Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free |
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SATURN Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 78ok,us |
thanks your words encourage me to write more. one day i hope we will meet again. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I enjoyed this~ Happy Valentine's Day~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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SATURN Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 78ok,us |
thanks but my valentines day was not so happy b/c i lost a very close friend that day she was only 16. [This message has been edited by SATURN (02-15-2006 07:44 PM).] |
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