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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
A tin fence Beside my candle. I watch you swat away a moth I hated creepy crawlies. Flickering In and out and back again. To touch Your skin is bare. Copper clouds Thinking you must be going blind behind your sunglasses. Relationship with God? No, he never made an effort to get to know me. Neon lights? Yeah just as we thought, but I’m not in heaven, yet. You know, I used to be an angel, Before I ever donned those wings, Fitting only in his religion. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
this was neat, 'Copper clouds Thinking you must be going blind behind your sunglasses' i loved this grouping and i found the ending to be quite intriguing as well. Cool post thanks for sharing Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
man, you freakin' rock my world with your poetry. "You know, I used to be an angel, Before I ever donned those wings, Fitting only in his religion." The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
A - MAY - ZING this was amazing courts! I LOVE IT can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
oooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhh wonderful. you're so beautiful and wonderful and amazing and i love you and miss you to bits. nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
you reminded me of my second ever screenname "devilwithnowings" that i changed from "angelwithwings". and i noticed your poem forms the shape of the anchor that is weighing you down in this poem. god courts, i love ya. never forger how amazing you are in your poetic musings! your thespian admirer, mike of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Aw, thank you all so much. Thank you Kaos, for reading and replying. Kurst for just being cool nd supportive. I love Laura Davie to bit and pieces. Same as above for Sopho. Ah, Mike, you are too cool. I see a new post of yours, must read! Hollow. Courts. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
"Thinking you must be going blind behind your sunglasses." This line is really kewl, Courts. Loved the write. coyote 8) "Only the dead, have seen the end of war." |
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stratagem888 New Member
since 2006-02-15
Posts 4 |
I like the subtle, religious theme behind this work and the cyrptic nature of it. |
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