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Bobomo Junior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 35 |
I get down on my hands and knees To tend my perfect rose I gently pull out all the weeds Sadly she never grows Crystal clear water I give from within Dampens her delicate leaves I fear it’s too late for me to begin Despite my fool heart’s beliefs Neglect in the past, I’ve given to her The soil just can not sustain Nutrients absent, she has to transfer Her roots to a bed without pain Flourish and grow, she can’t do with me I wish it were far from true I have no choice but to set her free Her life to begin anew The hole she has left can never be filled Her essence I’ll never forget A trust in love she has to rebuild Without me, I deeply regret Another must tend her, nurture her soil I hope he is honest and kind And loves her as deeply, with no turmoil A paradise for roots to entwine Find your garden my princess, my rose Somewhere your smile just beams Where that place is, your heart only knows Live out your happiest dreams |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
This braught a lump to my throat, it struck me so deeply. I could relate very well to this. i loved this part "The hole she has left can never be filled Her essence I’ll never forget A trust in love she has to rebuild Without me, I deeply regret Another must tend her, nurture her soil I hope he is honest and kind And loves her as deeply, with no turmoil A paradise for roots to entwine Find your garden my princess, my rose Somewhere your smile just beams Where that place is, your heart only knows Live out your happiest dreams" It put tears in my eyes. An inspired piece, and very beautifull. Keep up the work A sign in the wind |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Appreciate the resonance of this piece...it lingers after the read. I believe you captured resilience and selflessness in the heartfelt thoughts here. TD |
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