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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
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0 posted 2006-08-11 07:53 PM



There's people all around,
but you were no where to be found.
Why did we have that fight last night?
I wish I had said that I was right.
I'm sorry I said I hated you and wished for you to die.
But do you see what you are putting me through...
I'm gonna cry.
I'm going through hell, does that ring a bell?
I said I loved you, but now I'm not sure?
What is this game we play, Simon says?
I'm not your slave,
you're not gonna tell me what to do.
I'm not gonna listen to you.
Screw all the things you said.
You just finding ways to make me mad.
You said you'd love me now and forever for worse or for better.
I thought God had sent me an angel from above.
But really the devil sent me my unfaithful love.

~ If I speak of love and it wishes, as I squeeze my eyes shut, does your heart also break?~

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Sorrow
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since 2006-06-14
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Ireland
1 posted 2006-08-11 09:35 PM


Good poem! You really captured the turmoil and pain of a failing relationship!
cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

2 posted 2006-08-12 10:19 AM


thanks for everything. And commenting. That really means alot to me.
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