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Dark Poetry #4

Misunderstood

tatalinia
Member

since 2005-12-17

Posts 137
CA, US

0 posted 2006-08-04 11:15 AM

the memorys of our past still scribbled on these walls
and i cant see past tomrrow because im stuck with today
cant get you out of my head you lay there dead
wish i could erase this time in my life an start afresh

not seeing where it hurts not seeing how this is killing me
the blame is all on me in your mind, feeling as if you did me no harm
the biggest misunderstanding in this life time due to
you never stopping to hear what people are saying from time to time

our things still scattered on the floors, our travel bags still packed
pictures still in their folders, i try not to think of that
tossing an turning as the night gives way
its as if you feel nothing as you drift away in dream

impossible to live down this pain when i still see your face daily
hear you breathing through the misrable nights
i wish to escape but goodbyes hurt the most
though the healing will only begin when the path of the door is opened

so many say it can be made whole again if we tryed
but i no from lookin at you there is no possible hope
as you wake up an head to the door
an i silently sit here til the day comes for me to go

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

Digital_Hell
Member

since 2006-06-05

Posts 202
Amidst black roses

1 posted 2006-08-06 12:43 PM

I like it. Weve all had to watch lovers go... I could relate. Keep it up!

A sign in the wind
ringed by the falling petals
Alone
Amongst black roses

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

2 posted 2006-08-11 08:01 PM

yeah I'm in the same situation as well. I'm sorry you had to go through that that.
Other then that i thought this was really good. I hope to se more from you later in the future.

~If I speak of love and it wishes, as I sqeeze my eyes shut, does your heart also break?~

Sorrow
Member

since 2006-06-14

Posts 83
Ireland

3 posted 2006-08-11 09:33 PM

very good poem i like it and can feel your pain!

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