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Dark Poetry #4

Architecture of an Atheist

axslayerxisxborn
Junior Member

since 2006-08-03

Posts 10

0 posted 2006-08-05 09:09 AM

The sun’s light shall never illuminate my face
The acceptance of me is the sin of another
Because my faith refuses to be
Excommunication is all I receive
My sins are my own
By your standards I am damned
So send me to this hell you speak of
My head will be high and the smiles will spew
As I merrily trot though those gate of sin
I do not fear the opaque omnipotence of the devil himself
It is he who shall abandon all hope
For I have entered here
And you God, the conjurer of contradictions
Shall not be ostracized
From my oral obligation
To condemn those
Who lay condemnation upon me
It is he who leads you
A figureless being controlling souls
Who give their souls away to the unseen
Faith is but a joke
A series of excuses for fools afraid of the truth
Free will is all we have
A guarantee I will never lay down

lace_of_light
Junior Member

since 2006-08-02

Posts 44

1 posted 2006-08-05 12:16 PM

wow...you sure made your point. i like the way it flows and i now how you feel. i'm ready to accept death, though i'm not sure if i'm afraid of satan or not...

"areyouinorareyouout? eitherwayyoucan'twin." he said. "butthefallwillbefantasticandwhat'sleftisnothinglessthanperfection"

Silver and Cold

beautyincalvary
Member

since 2006-07-13

Posts 98

2 posted 2006-08-05 10:22 PM

I don't know if you even are one, but I am and this is exactly how I feel. Well said.

Philmont
Member

since 2004-01-10

Posts 61

3 posted 2006-08-06 12:31 PM

Your apostrophes (yeah, they'd have to be if you're an atheist) are great. Talking to a dead God!

Sorrow
Member

since 2006-06-14

Posts 83
Ireland

4 posted 2006-08-06 01:01 AM

This is an excellent piece! Heaven is denile. We die, we're gone that's it. Faith is waste of time.

Digital_Hell
Member

since 2006-06-05

Posts 202
Amidst black roses

5 posted 2006-08-06 12:30 PM

This is excellent! Faith is a joke, a waste of time. i love it! Funny how our work can echo each other. i could relate to this so well, seeing as how im meeting a friend at hells gate... Keep up this amazing work

A sign in the wind
ringed by the falling petals
Alone
Amongst black roses

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