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Dark Poetry #4

The House

zigwield
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 61

0 posted 2006-07-29 03:10 AM

The hour passed midnight
a House was damaged
in evil times
everybody is asleep

One night along with all
only dogs barking
its time of destruction
to where a House was

And while a person waits
it is the moment that at last
the ruins of the damaged House
will start to dissapear

It is the way of it
we know but not speak
it is the correct moment for the House
to be rebuilt again

I now realize
the rules of the game
it is abouut ideas
free expression

Darkest moments
we close our eyes to fantasize
our beliefs
our ideals

Are the guidings
but as we drive
i lost all of mine
and now it is time

To rebuilt
to reconstruct
the devasted House
of mine.

[This message has been edited by zigwield (07-29-2006 09:18 PM).]

Digital_Hell
Member

since 2006-06-05

Posts 202
Amidst black roses

1 posted 2006-07-30 09:33 AM

Very powerfull words! and hauntingly sad. I loved it a lot!

"To rebuilt
to reconstruct
the devasted House
of mine."

I loved these lines, they speak of such pain and loss. Of such suffering. Very beautifull. Keep it up!

hells gate reads Abandon hope all ye that enter here
shall we go?
the road to hell is paved with good intentions.
Will you walk with me?

Philmont
Member

since 2004-01-10

Posts 61

2 posted 2006-07-30 09:22 PM

Yeah, oftentimes youre ideals will crumble before your face once you get into the real world. Ever wonder though, if you should just let that house crumble and go the "way of it" so you can let go and build a different one?

zigwield
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 61

3 posted 2006-07-31 11:54 AM

i really do not have an answer to this... not yet...

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