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Dark Poetry #4

Never Forever

Andrew Dickinson
New Member

since 2006-07-26

Posts 8

0 posted 2006-07-30 05:51 AM

I love despite as you spite,
for I cried at the thought:
another Dickinson,
who I forever am,
and yet the poet you
ever deemed of me not.

Digital_Hell
Member

since 2006-06-05

Posts 202
Amidst black roses

1 posted 2006-07-30 09:24 AM

Interesting write. I foun d it very sad for some reason...

"and yet the poet you
ever deemed of me not."

i find those lines very beautifull. Keep up the work

hells gate reads Abandon hope all ye that enter here
shall we go?
the road to hell is paved with good intentions.
Will you walk with me?

Sorrow
Member

since 2006-06-14

Posts 83
Ireland

2 posted 2006-07-31 04:07 AM

Short and sweet. I liked it also. Keep them coming!

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-07-31 09:17 AM

"I love despite as you spite,
for I cried at the thought:
another Dickinson,
who I forever am"

I loved this part! It was so sad yet so sweet... I find that I agree with digital on this being a sad poem, for me...

Btw, WElcome to piptalk! HAven't seen you here before so I thought i'd welcome you now. Hope you enjoy the site

Keep the poems coming! I loved this one a lot, thanks for sharing

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