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Philmont Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 61 |
Someones when I look down on you and realize there's nothing much left of you, it strikes me that when we both look to the sun (if that's what you call it now) there isn't much there either. Maybe you could enlighten me, how did we get all the way out here, in the darkness wandering around something we once believed existed but now can hardly see? Was it Neptune, what they call a God of the Sea? He lost us, didn't he? He was blue, blue as the |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I'm not sure I understood all of this but what I did understand I liked. I thought it was an interesting poem to read, something slightly different than anything else. Although, I think that the first word is supposed to be "sometimes" but I'm not sure? Very good write though, I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing  @-->--- |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
"Maybe you could enlighten me" ? This doesn't seem to be complete ... is there more to it ? *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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