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zigwield Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 61 |
i saw a dream last night i saw there a tree it was so nice i saw the road it was straight but all else is cold so i needed faith statics, noise and voices do not close ears do not shut the eyes just keep on rolling the wheels and have an open mind respond is just a few times wise what we need is to walk i do not try to advertize likers and drinks but only talk creepers and feeding monsters i salute your motives but to remind you uncles i am your child if you have not yet noticed and remember what i say i try to hide in you the prize is enough to pay i just want to be with you |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
A nice write. I could relate to it, just dont let your faith blind you, and make sure the person you want to be with is the right person. hells gate reads Abandon hope all ye that enter here shall we go? the road to hell is paved with good intentions. Will you walk with me? |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I’m not sure that I understood this the way you might’ve wanted us too, but I liked this a lot. It was different, a little confusing for me in parts, but interesting. As soon as you started reading the first stanza you just wanted to keep on reading and reading. It kind of captured me, I couldn’t stop until I reached the end and yet even than I still wanted to read more. Poems like that I can’t help but love, they have like a magnetic draw, and this one certainly had that for me! It was brilliant… Thanks so much for sharing  @-->--- |
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