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zigwield Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 61 |
Even to the sadest dark times You are the only person that i think And with you i want to be Every moment of this life You are in my mind, place me Among with your adorable materials I want to be a part of nasty friends Lonely people only sometimes have Only for different minds that nowhere Very few can today find Else place is boring, not so black Yet, please meet me Oh i want desperately to meet you Untill the night have a nice time |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Right on. This is nice. Sounds like your barking at the moon. God bless, In Chirst, -Craig balloons are made of rubber... |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Umm, it was interesting? I'm not sure I understood all of it but I do agree that it did kind of sound like you were barking at the moon/for the moon... "Lonely people only sometimes have Only for different minds that nowhere Very few can today find Else place is boring, not so black" I enjoyed this stanza a lot, i can't say that i relate, but it stood out to me for some reason... Very nice write on this one  @-->--- |
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