Dark Poetry #4 |
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emeralddreamer Junior Member
since 2006-03-24
Posts 27PA, United States |
Hollowed spirit, mirrored soul. winged messenger of flight... Doomsday's forgotten seed... lest your existence be for naught as you bandage your wound of dreams lost with a torniquet of bludgeoned memories for you see, the moon's embrace has been the only solace of this woman who stands before you her image no longer recognizable, for she resides where only spirits dwell her soul, transparent unable to mask the pain while shards of regret stain crimson across once periwinkle horizons For icicles have taken up residence within the shadows still summon me on too frequent an occasion and I've not felt the need to bask in the rays of light Until now... Come with me, let us cast aside our apprehensions and take that final step into the land of the living |
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Cherishable_Baybee Member
since 2006-01-04
Posts 57 |
your poem was a great write too hope to read many more of your poems ---Cherishable_Baybee |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
I agree that was really well done. |
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greysolace Member
since 2006-03-27
Posts 71 |
this is nice. very well done. *applause* Poetry is written emotion |
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emeralddreamer Junior Member
since 2006-03-24
Posts 27PA, United States |
Many thanks to each of you ![]() |
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Alone in the dark Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 105On the edge of an abyss |
This is beautiful. It has a sort of haunted feeling to it. You have a lot of talent. hope to read more from you ^*^Angel^*^ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey emeralddreamer, Awesome first post! I loved this, and I’m going to steal what alone in the dark said and say I thought this was very haunting also. Kind of a mystical like appearance to the poem… Very cool. “lest your existence be for naught as you bandage your wound of dreams lost with a torniquet of bludgeoned memories” I loved that part, when I read that it brought an interesting image to my mind… The way you worded this poem was just great! Thanks for sharing, I’d love to see more ![]() @-->--- |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Josette~ I greatly enjoyed the imagery in this, especially THIS - 'periwinkle horizons' That is like finding poetry within a poetic piece~ ![]() *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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rockbabe Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 105 |
Very Nicely Witten!! |
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