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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I see them The masses Confused on my feet I only want to love them all How can I be best spent? Like a dollar bill before a furnace Though the cross is thick and heavy with blood Here's to romance beyond neglect A pillar beaten and broken by his hand On this, may you stand balloons are made of rubber... |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I loved this! I’m not sure how you wanted this to be understood but how I understood it this was just way amazing. If I was to pick a favorite spot it would have to be the whole poem, cause it’s like without one part the rest is incomplete, missing the other part of themselves… Your wording on this poem was simply brilliant, no words were wasted, and it got the point across. As for the first stanza, well, I know I say this a lot, but it made me want to read more. It was just an interesting beginning that got my curiosity up… Good write on this one once again I loved reading your poem!  @-->--- |
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