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zigwield
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since 2006-06-25
Posts 61


0 posted 2006-06-28 10:53 AM


The two weird women
seems will never leave my nights

One is white
other is black

Both so strange
both so dark

extremely beautiful sometimes
deadly ugly other days

and while i depart
i try to cast them away

again they hunt me down
better take a cover

better make a feeling
the shield of life

it is then that i ask
how strong can it be?

society and liberty
just like the love of cars

and the pain of the sea
in a black cave that will never see

lets question ouselves:
why does it rain when i do not expect?
why does the past becomes the future when you just forgot it?
why does crazy people say wisest things?
why?
why do we need to run away instead of facing these fears?
no drink, or whatever (call it houlouhoulou) will solve just postpone and embaress ourselves

this woman can sometimes be awfull
pretty awfull

but she is definetely prettier
than Assa and Anna

© Copyright 2006 zigwield - All Rights Reserved
cherrys_rule
Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

1 posted 2006-10-22 08:03 PM


I like this poem. I hope to see more from you in the future. thanks for sharing.
Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
2 posted 2006-10-31 10:15 PM


Yes to be or not to be prettier or just a different look. this one can fool if your not careful....good poem I will try to find something to post that can live up to this but it will be hard!!!!

AK

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