Dark Poetry #4 |
Shaking |
buckysimone Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 27 |
shaking your hand underneath masks of jesters and lies disillusioned by smiles of youths scents of elderly homes homes to the friends friends of abusive lives living the lives the lives through thick pricket paths dirty tattered jeans rough fingernails runaway paths surrounded mirages of roses finding exits exits never to exist in a life of dirty paper bags cries for help grab my hand my savior shaking your hand underneath |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Bucky, this is an amazing write you have here I got soo much out of it for some reason it left me with the notion of alcoholism and the reaching out for help also, the notion of just souls left with no one to help them beautiful writing xxoo |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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