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Dark Poetry #4

Predator Of Romance

Internalexile
Junior Member

since 2006-06-15

Posts 38
UK

0 posted 2006-06-16 05:35 AM

I've seen your kind before,
You smile,
Laugh,
Then stab for the heart.

You prowl the empty spaces,
Alone but not lonely,
Your libido is all the company you need.

When you strike its almost beautiful
You'll give,
Give,
Give,
Give,
And then take in a flash of movement.

They're never prepared for the fangs beneath the smile,
The sting lurking beneath the lies,
I bet you like the look of abject horror on their faces,
Don't you?

You don't take lives,
You take souls,
You take trust,
You take happiness.

You are the predator of Romance,
The black widow of the bedroom,
And the last thing a happy man see's before oblivion of the soul.

And you love it,
Don't You!?

Let the moonlight paint your face, let the stars be your cloak...

Sorrow
Member

since 2006-06-14

Posts 83
Ireland

1 posted 2006-06-18 12:34 PM

Very dark take on romance, you make this person sound so evil and cruel. I like this a lot. Good work.

Frank W. Torres
Member

since 2006-06-10

Posts 133

2 posted 2006-06-18 09:22 AM

Its a sad thing. Nice poem.

Alone in the dark
Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 105
On the edge of an abyss

3 posted 2006-06-18 12:01 PM

OUCH! Sounds like someone once cut your heart out with a playdough knife... Hope you've learned to recognize, and avoid that type. great poem

^*^Angel^*^

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