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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

0 posted 2006-06-15 08:50 PM

I get depressed really fast really easy.
Can you please take time out of your day to help me?
I feel alone,scared,sad,and mad.
Why does it feel like this all in my head?
I feel like committing suicide, the next minute I want to find a corner and hide.
Why do I feel like this all in my head?

Short i know, but I actually like this one. I wrote this one i was at my friends house and This is how i felt.
I would like to know how you feel about this so can i have some feed back from you guys?.

Sorrow
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since 2006-06-14

Posts 83
Ireland

1 posted 2006-06-15 09:07 PM

I know your pain. I also feel this way most of the time. Your poem is very true and honest. I can feel the emotion in it.

Trixy
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since 2006-06-14

Posts 4

2 posted 2006-06-15 09:19 PM

I really enjoyed your poem.
It's nice to know that I'm not alone.

perfect stranger
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since 2006-05-29

Posts 54
on cloud 9

3 posted 2006-06-15 09:52 PM

how near this is to my life, everybody must feel like this at one point in time, hope you have a happy life, a good but sad poem.

cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

4 posted 2006-06-18 09:26 PM

Thank you you guys, thanks for your comments

secret_truth_lies
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since 2006-11-14

Posts 74

5 posted 2006-12-29 08:43 PM

I really like this poem you have wrote. But I hope you don't go through with it cuz then I'll have no best friend.

secret_truth_lies
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since 2006-11-14

Posts 74

6 posted 2007-01-03 03:59 PM

You know what you have the gift of writing any kind of subject towards poems. Either it's just you being totally stupid to you being really depressed. The stupid thing went a little far but me meaning you being really funny. I love the fact that God gave you a special ability to write. I love the fact that He gave me two eyes and a brain to read them. I really look up to you chica. I really do hope to see more from ya in the future.

click1
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since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

7 posted 2007-01-04 02:46 AM

Bipolar?,, anyone can make a label...so who am I to say?? Well done and... I heard ya!!

"poetry is a vent!??!"

Click

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

8 posted 2007-01-06 11:52 PM

hmmm I know how that feels really do. It sux, how so many people have to go through the same thing and I know I felt like nobody knew what it was like when clearly so many people do

love to see more...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

9 posted 2007-04-24 07:58 PM

Yeah i don't think it was a bipolar issue. I just get really depressed really easy. Just because of my past life all the horrible things that have came to me out of no where, and i just couldn't stop then from appearing. So I don't think bipolar was the Problem.

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